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Awesome game! It took me a minute to figure out how the scenes were named, but I felt like a genius once it clicked. Oswald ended up being my surprise favorite after getting into his backstory, and the ending hit really hard. The only questions I still have are...

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Who was Amelia West? Not a Galley, going by the name, but she had to have been someone close to Rupert. Maybe his fiancee, and he went on to marry someone else when he forgot her?

Where did this curse even come from? Eleanor's death? If there's any explanation for it, that seems like the most likely one for what happened here, but Oswald and Katherine both remembered her. Also there's the fact that she died young and Amelia was old enough to play piano I assume professionally, and the chain that killed the outside agent is unrelated.

Nice game! The biggest "Aha" moment for me is definitely figuring out the true nature of what's happening, though I did that at about half way through, after that, there's not much mystery about what will happen next, as we all know how the story will end. Still, I enjoyed the writing, as it made the inevitable process painful to read (in a good way).

I love investigative games (like the Roottrees are Dead) so I knew that I would enjoy this game, but it completely blew me away! The story and characters were really well written and truly gave you a 'visual' of what was happening despite being a text-based game. Most of the timeline was fairly easy to figure out, but the wherabouts of some people evaded me for a while so I had to guess where they could possibly be and when through trial and error.

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It was scary how quickly everything went wrong and how the deaths couldn't be prevented; the fact that that the character numbers indicated who was next to die created a sense of dramatic irony.

Annie was my favourite character by far: I admired that she was intent on trying to figure out what was happening (although it ended up being her undoing) and her attempt to end the chain of deaths was brave.

I felt particularly bad for Victoria and Damian as they were so close to getting away from Galley House and Victoria never got the chance to tell Damian that she was pregnant. It was also heartbreaking that Victoria unknowingly caused her sister's death by providing her with the list of everyone's names as that helped her remember.

John's death still confuses me as he says that he doesn't remember any of them (referring to the other people in Galley House) but still dies. I know he wasn't meant to die as the thunderclap didn't occur for him, but why did he die? Did he take his own life because of his divorce and the fact that he is no longer in contact with his daughter?

The final scene I discovered was Rupert Galley's death, which I believe was caused by him remembering his sister Amelia who had died when Rupert and Oswald were children. They must have lived this long because nobody had remembered her, until Rupert heard the music from the piano which started the chain of events that led to the death of everyone in the story.

I have so much more I could say, but will mention that there are 97 files in total and to check each scene number has an appearance from everyone who is still alive for those who may be struggling.

not sure how many dots i need for an effective spoiler wall
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hopefully this is enough,
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My reading of it was that John killed himself, by jumping from the attic to the entrance out of guilt for "killing" Annie. (or he hangs himself?) The clues are there from "The audio keeps going, though, for an upsettingly long time." when the audio description thing says it usually lasts only 30 seconds after the actual death. So he didn't die instantly like everyone else.

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I think you just have to guess with the dots lol

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Yeah I agree that he must have taken his own life, but it is more the reasoning behind it that confuses me. It suggests that he doesn't even remember Annie (or anyone else) which is why he is excluded from the curse, so he might not remember the whole situation with Annie in the Chapel, and therefore not remember his guilt. The invitation from Rupert Galley suggests that John was having a particularly rough time following his divorce which is what led me to think that maybe his death was due to that.

It completely went over my head that the audio going on for so long meant that it took a long time for him to die - he must have still been alive after jumping from the attic but bled out (or succumbed to his injuries) at the entrance where he landed.

Very fun! The final mystery was pretty tough but it was enjoyable throughout.

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Just played through the game and absolutely loved it! The mechanic was neat, and figuring out what was going on was a lot of fun.


Still have a few questions unanswered (encoded in rot13 to prevent spoilers):


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Nyfb, ab pyhr jung'f hc jvgu gur unatzna tnzr - V pbhyqa'g trg nalguvat bhg bs vg.

This was a really fun game! I really liked the logic and the story was properly spooky. Would love to see something in a similar vein in the future.

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I believe I've finished the game (I got the 'final note').


I got a few questions (spoilers bellow for anyone reading this!!)


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I understand the basic phenomena of a thunderclap making someone die, and being forgotten about. The next person who remembers them ends up dead.

What is the cause? Or is it just a big mystery? Clearly it has nothing to do with the Galley house if Katherine died in her own home. The note-writer even finds it funny they blame it on ghosts. WELL WHAT DO WE BLAME IT ON!!

What was Annie trying to accomplish? Was she trying to end herself before the curse could? It seems the note taker is happy she tried it, so we don't have to try it ourselves. So I guess he's saying she tried the solution of killing the next cursed person but it didn't work out.

Does Dvorak's Humoresque relate to the mystery at all or is it just a fun song you included?

The final note lists almost everyone's names...except for John's. Oversight or does he survive? 

Finally, from what I understand, after the Galley incident the same thing happens at...whatever company we're working for. The final death is the agent whose memos we're reading. From what I understand, the people who can't learn their names (such as Alan) are probably close to them. So if they remembered them, they would die. This is probably why the agent is glad to die, since he's so removed. Did I get it right?

Lastly...what's the hangman answer.

Wow! Very impressive!

I don't want to give too much away, obviously, but it sounds like you've pretty much figured almost everything out!

I will say that Dvorak's Humoresque does play a part in the story, but there's a very subtle clue to it hidden at the very end of the game... (It's not too important though.)

And there's a good reason John's name isn't mentioned at the end! (After all, he's a bit different from the others...)

(Also, I'm super impressed you got the final puzzle, and thanks for giving the hints to Aprot!)

Then did John uuuh jumps off? He says he doesn't remember anyone. Maybe he isn't affected by the curse or he died before he could remember anyone, ending it? 

I thought maybe Dvorak's Humoresques was haunted and anyone who listened to it dies. But that can't be true since John's listened to it as well. Not sure how else Dvorak Humoresques is related other than Amelia's playing it made Rupert remember her.


I'm still a bit unsatisfied without knowing all the answers but it was a good game and I'm glad I played it. When ACT 2 finally explained what was happening it was a big "ooooh" moment.

Regarding John's scene at the end:
00-audio-recovery says that the audio is collected from dead bodies. Therefore, John definitely died as he was the only possible source for the audio.

He probably dies from the (gunshot?) wound inflicted on him in 23-CH-1-2, independently of the "curse". 

As for what Annie was trying to accomplish, I think the intention was to toaster bath the both of them, as to eliminate any remaining witnesses/possibility of the curse spreading. But this interpretation goes against the fact that she asked John to tell her mother??? So maybe she didn't really figure out the whole picture.

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I don't think Annie shot John, I think it wouldve been very clear if this had happened.  Given the structure of the house and the sequence of events, it makes more sense to me that John simply jumped out the Attic window and landed on the Entrance pavement, killing himself (out of dread, survivor's guilt, or whatnot).

I believe what Annie was thinking was that the curse spreads when they die by the curse via the "thunderclap", so if she kills herself before that occurs then the curse can no longer spread. For one reason or another (perhaps she was just too late, or perhaps this only makes the curse proceed), this didn't really work.

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A tiny thing about the hangman thing, that youtube video leads to a piece of piano music, and at the beginning you can see the title. On that piece of cardboard it says FOXTROT. that is 7 letters, which is the amount of blanks, and fits with the "thinking of an animal" theme. BUT IT DOESNT WORK. so dissapointing, I thought i was so smart :"(

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Hehe tiny.


I have tried every letter of the alphabet and it's wrong. I tried a few numbers and symbols and it didn't react

Hihi!

I am stuck on a few parts, those being (SPOILERS!):

- Finding number thirteen death scene, i know her name, just not the location.
- The relevance of scene 10-MA-5-6, there's still a gray number next to it.
- Finding the suspicous death and the hidden scene mentioned at 26.
- That weird hangman game.

Can you help?

Also, lovely game! I really enjoyed figuring all of this out, you really undersell it in the description. 

Especially figuring out who was where when was really fun, and the twist was fun to discover to of course.


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Hi! Glad you enjoyed it!

It's a little tricky figuring out exactly what you're missing, but I'll try to give some clues... (SPOILERS!)

  • Are you missing a scene in 09? If so, hopefully you can work out who was there, and someone else comes in afterwards and discovers what happened... But it's also possible you've missed a sneaky scene in 12! (Try 'find 6'.)
  • I think the only other thing you're missing is the hidden scene mentioned in 26. It sounds like you've worked out who it involves (and in particular the first letter of their name!), but to figure out the location you'll need to work out who else they're related to (and who THAT person is related to) who might have mentioned something about where they could be...
  • If that doesn't make much sense, then it may be worth considering which of the deaths you've seen so far is 'suspicious', in that it doesn't quite fit with the others.
  • It's safe to ignore the hangman game.

Let me know if that's too vague or if I've misunderstood where you're at. I've tried to make the final puzzle as clear as I could, but it's still a lot to pull together in one go... In fact, the who, the where and the when are all pretty tricky to figure out! So let me know if anything doesn't make sense.

But thanks for your comment! It's lovely to know other people have enjoyed the game!

Got the tinniest bit further!

I have found the missing grey number scene i mentioned, it was #6 searching #4's room before #4 enters (As an aside, I do think I have every scene, except the hidden one)

If I am not mistaken #13's name is Amelia West and dies during timeframe 01 during the thunderclap before the second thunderclap? It is unclear if there is 1 (so just Rupert) or 2 (which would mean Amelia and then Rupert)

If I had to choose a suspicous death, I guess it would be the last one. In scene 26 a loud thud is heard, but no thunder (possibly meaning annie's loophole worked?)

Also, is the hangman game like a bonus thing, if so, what commands do you use? 

This last one is a real headscratcher! But to summarise, in my mind the hidden scenen is the death of #13 (Amelia West) in a location (?) during 01

Also I forgot to mention, but I also loved figuring the whole curse out, the way you've written that was so good. First you think someone sent a fake invitation, then you think eddie might have been the culprit.

OMG and sorry for ranting but I jumped in glee when I noticed the deaths happen in order of the numbers, LOVE!

PS:  Maybe you can take this whole convo as inspiration for your next game, our back and forth looks like deranged to an outsider.

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Hi Aprot! I just discovered the 13th death so I'll write a few clues to help you out! 

I don't think we can spoil so read bellow at your own risk! I'll space things out for you

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1- You're mistaken about the 13th victim's identity. Ruppert says it's been years since she heard Amelia play, and that she disappeared "one day". So we can assume she's not present today.

2- You're correct about the suspicious death

3- The reason that death is suspicious, is that we hear a thunder, but nobody dies. John is still alive.

4- This means someone has died instead of John.

5- Instead of numbers (like John being 1) you search this person through a letter. (such as 04-KI-Z if that person was in the kitchen at 04).

6- This person has to be alive after Annie and die before John.

7- Searchable locations are always in bold. Before John dies, a thunder is heard "far away". This didn't happen with other thunders. 

8- When someone dies, everyone forgets them. Only later, the next person to die remembers them.

9- John never remembered Annie. Who did?

-This is the last clue! Below is the asnwer-

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10- Search 25-WI-K

The person that dies is Katherine (the woman on the other side of the phone). Even though she is Annie's and Victoria's mother, she only mentions Annie (because she already forgot about vic). Later on, after Annie dies, she calls again. At first she seems confused about who Annie is, then she remembers it's her daughter. She still doesn't remember about Vic. This means she's the next person to die.

The thunder is far away because it happens at Wintercote and not at the Galley manor.

Thanks for the help Tinynanami, I would've never guessed!

Although I did think it might've something to do with Wintercot, I'd never linked it up with Katherine.
You explained really well why it wasn't Amelia West, although that whole clue did sent me of the wrong path of trying to find a death in the far past (also because of the convo in the kitchen about that death.)

If you're curious, my opinion about the suicide of Annie is that it actually made sense to me. Not that I'm the writer or anything, but my interpretation was that she was trying to find a loophole. If the curse dictates that there's a thunderclap before the death of the chosen person, her reasoning might've been that breaking that rule (dying before the thunderclap) could maybe break the curse. So that would be my explanation.

Also I think the story wroks better without an explanation. It's the same with the original Groundhog Day film. It works better unexplained, makes it much eerier I think. Although I do get your frustration. The story has a bit of an Agatha Christie vibe, so the absense of a reveal does annoy me a little bit to, although the death of Katherine fills that roll a bit.

Either way, that's my two cents. My compliments for figuring out the last death, top noth detectivework!

Ps: what were your theories on that hangman game? It's a 7 letter word but it says 12, so i thought there might've been a mention of an animal at timestamp 12?

Hope you enjoyed my ramblings <3

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Hi!

I think Tinynanami has already done a great job giving a series of hints (better than I did anyway), so hopefully that helps. (But don't read them all at once!)

I'll just say though, thanks so much for your comments! It's so useful to know how other people interpreted different things, and it will definitely help with the next game... (Like, I think you're very justified in being suspicious of Annie's death, which I didn't really intend! Her death definitely makes things more confusing than I'd realised...)

Really glad you enjoyed it though. Good luck finishing it!

(Also, sorry this reply is a bit late, I didn't see the notification)

No worries, Tinynanami's comment was really helpful!

To be honest the most confusing part for me was finding that last scene, because i thought it was something relating to the past (It comes up pretty often in the story actually)

I would've not guessed K because she's a really small character. It didn't even cross my mind honestly (especially because she's not given a number but a letter, so that removes her even more)

Either way, I'd love to see your next game! If it's anything like this Sign. Me. Up!

Ps: just one more thing about that hangman thing, is that even something we could/should try to solve?