Finished the demo, it looks really promising!
For now it looks more like an intro chapter, with girls treating MC like an NPC for most of the time, but it's still very cute! I really think it deserves to be at least a several hours vn. Would like to see more of the world. When they talked about the forest camp i was like "aww i really want to go with them :D " The art looks very polished this time, and in your previous vns i was always thinking like "such a waste to create full set of sprites and stuff just for a 15-30 min story" :D The music is a bit repetitive, though.
Looking forward to the new chapters!