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Thomas, I loved it especially when I was trapped in a room full of enemies and I ran out of bullets and got a “bang” flag out of it OMG amazing!

Firstly thank you for taking the time to play and thank you for the feedback! The fact anyone played it is mind bending to me. I will have a look into refining the planchette mechanic experience. I did anticipate this a little and incorporated the response into the dialogue in some cases.

The game was initially a lot darker in theme and had curse words for example but the play tests reported that;

1. Swearing added nothing to the game and detracted from the characters due to their age.
2. The story was initially too heavy and this made it hard to wrap up to a conclusion and somewhat was not enjoyable so a lighter approach was selected. However the theme of the game did not play test with younger people (14 -18) before being toned down.

I would be open to refining the story as it is very simple due to the story composer tooling I made which essentially generates the dialog boxes based on a film like script. This would also allow you an opportunity to play it again.

Hey, I can do that. I have an update coming soon and I will make an AppImage for it. Apologies for the late reply.

I can't wait for this!!

This is outstanding! Well done.