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I don't feel attacked at all. In fact I really like this kind of in depth character analysis. This does make the section where you need to sneak past hyenas make more sense to me character wise.

It seems to me like Mezz can tell that he's just a few words away from just "giving in" but he's still so determined to complete his mission. So even under what amount to extreme danger and a high likelihood of falling he's still not giving in and it takes drugs and implanted conditioning to make him do so.

I do want to say that the original idea is more like "how much the conditioning and repeated fucking is affecting him and wants to indulge even for a moment" than "he's an inherent slut wanting to let loose."

But understanding his character more makes that not work more in my brain now. I get why he wouldn't do that. It's interesting that I often see a lot of character depth and porn games like this. There are obviously games where that's the whole point but I often see it emerge seemingly as a side consequence as well. I think because it brings out things that are crying out to be explored creatively but don't get explored in a lot of media.

I was more thinking the opposite tbh.

A scene where Mezz isn't drugged, but has been defeated and therefore trained so many times that the barrier between his hypnotized self and his regular self is very thin. So in his lucid state he asks Mahir, of his own will, to put his Hyena cock up his ass.

Because lucid Mezz must be able to tell what's happening at least a little. And it's scary to not know...but there's also a part of him that wants to know what it's actually like. Like...there's gotta be a reason why drugged up Mezz wants it so bad. So in a moment of vulnerability or being unsure in himself, he asks the only person who knows how he's conditioned (and therefore maybe knows how not to put him into the drugged up state) to, let's say "let him know what it's like". 

Part of my mental image is: after asking Mahir pulls out the clicker to put Mezz into that state because they don't entirely get what the bunny is asking for her and Mezz goes "No wait! Not with that."

And after that the full implication of what Mezz wants sinks in and once they understand they begin teasing Mezz about it.

I'm really glad you like the idea! And I wasn't expecting anything to be added.

Honestly this comment was far less "a serious suggestion" and more of a "if I don't mention this I'm going to spend the next month learning rpgm in order to make a one minute long mod" kind of situation. 

I know because I'm currently knee deep in twine due to something similar happening and I do not have the time or energy for another project like that. 

I love this game, I'm so glad that I bought it. It hits so many kinks and toys with some really hot ideas.

I normally don't do this, but an idea has just lodged itself in my brain and won't let go. And that's that I think there should be a short little scene (using one of the 3 pre-baked in-combat CGs maybe) once Mezz is completely lost to the dragon where he can willingly ask Mahir to top him and to not use the clicker to make him forget it. There's all sorts of ways to play it I think but I just love the idea of Mezz wanting to actually remember one of his Hyena encounters.

This game has a lot of potential! I want to enjoy it so much, unfortunately the bug where he/him characters and "no" selected for the pussy option still spawning with a pussy means I can't enjoy it the way I want to yet.

I really want to though, this game comes so close to scratching a hard to reach itch.

I want to say that impregnation, bellies developing over time, birthing, and some kind of stat change to reflect all of that would be so welcome.