I think its definitely got potential. The art style is unique and interesting there is a music video I like by Aesop Rock called Dorks with a similar neon high contrast style you may like to check out.
If I was to mention a few elements I found a little frustrating they would be the interact hit boxes on the NPC's seem small. I would of liked the interactions to be a bit easier to start. I sometimes found myself walking around them and clicking for bit before the dialogue triggered.
Also when fighting the ghost deer the reuse of the gun particle was a little out there and broke the flow a little bit. Would of really liked some of the art style to be used against me.
Other than that I enjoyed and will keep my eyes open for more to try out.