I haven't read the story yet, but I have a couple of notes:
- It sounds like you intended the general version to be free, and the Director's cut to cost money? Because, unless you changed that without changing the description, both are available for free. (I'll stick with the general version out of respect, but wanted to give you a heads up just in case you weren't aware)
- It would be nice if a PDF version was provided. I don't normally keep a word processor on my phone, and in general work with PDFs far more often than word documents.
Other than that, I'll try to leave a comment on the story itself once I've read it!