Artistic presentation and audio presentation are 5/5.
Really my only notes I have are that sometimes it's a little jarring when there's narrative text, because it'll be in quotes and MC's nameplate will be present in the textbox, so in non voiced sections, there's confusion on when Maru is talking vs having internal thoughts.
I'm interested to see what future builds bring to the table, I think the team had an amazing first impression with this first build