Well that was fun, i'd love to see the final game someday.
As of this post, I'd say the game has potential, with decent exploration and story. However, I can't rate this one too highly as it's a just a proof of concept demo in terms of its gameplay.
It's a nice sandbox-style twine game with a defined goal. Because I stole the 2 main stats from this game for my own, I have a moral obligation to rate this one 5 stars.