
The Target - Epilogue - Page 1
Couldn't.
I couldn't do it.
I couldn't leave it to end on that dark a note. I'm just too big a softie. We had to see him be okay again. Sorry to those of you who hate Kyle. He's okay. A little sore, and a bit shaken up, but okay. :P
I couldn't do it.
I couldn't leave it to end on that dark a note. I'm just too big a softie. We had to see him be okay again. Sorry to those of you who hate Kyle. He's okay. A little sore, and a bit shaken up, but okay. :P
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Well considering he mentions he has clients he does this to, riding them hard and putting 'm away wet in a non-descript location for extra embarassment's sake they might get off on. That said can't have his clients getting arrested, they'd need to be wherever in public clothed.
I absolutely *DO NOT HATE HIM* I think this is a GREAT ending... it's both soft and a "LITTLE" teeny bit dark..
.. but it's just the ending I honestly do love..
as was said by me in an earlier post.. he's going to be sore, shaken, and will have learned his lesson, but he's otherwise OK.. and that is just WONDERFUL to this little fur's sense of kink.
thank you for doing it!
Goddess bless you being a big sweet softie
.. but it's just the ending I honestly do love..
as was said by me in an earlier post.. he's going to be sore, shaken, and will have learned his lesson, but he's otherwise OK.. and that is just WONDERFUL to this little fur's sense of kink.
thank you for doing it!
Goddess bless you being a big sweet softie
It's fine; the people who liked the last ending can just ignore this page, and the people who didn't like it can savor this page. Everyone wins.
I still say that the sequel/next story should end with him losing all his bottom energy and so he tries to be a dom, but he's so smol and cute that no one can take him seriously.
I still say that the sequel/next story should end with him losing all his bottom energy and so he tries to be a dom, but he's so smol and cute that no one can take him seriously.
Hahaha yes ...maybe a bit too generous with him.
I would have added a little twist and left him a note stick in his face (that he reads after that sudden traumatized wake) saying "your clothes are 2km away right by the end of the park below the last bench ...the sun is rising. I wouldn't take that long" ...and only then notecing in rapid succession that he is alive, he is naked, and he has to make the walk (or run) of shame all the way to the entrance of the park. XDDDDD
...thus, ending his real previus punishment on a shameful note.
Ones again this was tremendusly enjoyable Ru. Thanks for shareing your work.
I would have added a little twist and left him a note stick in his face (that he reads after that sudden traumatized wake) saying "your clothes are 2km away right by the end of the park below the last bench ...the sun is rising. I wouldn't take that long" ...and only then notecing in rapid succession that he is alive, he is naked, and he has to make the walk (or run) of shame all the way to the entrance of the park. XDDDDD
...thus, ending his real previus punishment on a shameful note.
Ones again this was tremendusly enjoyable Ru. Thanks for shareing your work.
I'm okay with a happy ending. Don't ever let anyone deride you for being a softie~
I mean, if you still wanted to be mean to Kyle, you could let the tigeress have a go at him herself.
And officially give her a name, which I don't think she's ever had~
....and now my mind is playing out a scene where when she confronts him, he actually addresses her by name and apologizes right off, which slightly slightly blunts her anger that he actually remembers it, and that's how we (the audience) get to learn what her name is.
Or she was tracking him down to make sure he was okay, because "I just wanted some legal advice, not to get you black bagged!"
I mean, if you still wanted to be mean to Kyle, you could let the tigeress have a go at him herself.
And officially give her a name, which I don't think she's ever had~
....and now my mind is playing out a scene where when she confronts him, he actually addresses her by name and apologizes right off, which slightly slightly blunts her anger that he actually remembers it, and that's how we (the audience) get to learn what her name is.
Or she was tracking him down to make sure he was okay, because "I just wanted some legal advice, not to get you black bagged!"
I mean, I don't hate Kyle...
Okay, I hate Kyle. He was only ever 'sorry' when he thought it would get him something. Not like I wanted to see something drastic happen to him, but it bugs me a bit to see how many people seem to feel like "it's okay that he's a frivolously Machiavellian little bastard, because he's cute!" This is an appropriate epilogue IMO, but it sure as hell ain't redemption. Maybe Kyle will have some sort of character development arc some time? Maybe not.
Okay, I hate Kyle. He was only ever 'sorry' when he thought it would get him something. Not like I wanted to see something drastic happen to him, but it bugs me a bit to see how many people seem to feel like "it's okay that he's a frivolously Machiavellian little bastard, because he's cute!" This is an appropriate epilogue IMO, but it sure as hell ain't redemption. Maybe Kyle will have some sort of character development arc some time? Maybe not.
I mean, even if something more horrible didn't happen, he did clearly pass out. There could be any number of reminders about what might happen if he misbehaves again, including an email with a preview of some of his 'trial.' Just reminding him to be a good boy if he doesn't want a repeat lesson. Or said victim shows up to say hello with a clip of that trial as well, just to dig it in a bit more.
And so on, so forth. Good work!
And so on, so forth. Good work!
I know some people think Kyle is an asshole, but I actually like him, and I feel sorry for what happened to him. I'm into overstimulation kink, but this comic kind of reminded my about the infamous GTA 5 torture mission, which I wasn't very fond of. I'm glad you did this epilogue because I'm happy to see this naughty fennec is ok, though in "some" pain ^^;
Thank you for this. I kept thinking about those last panels on the last page. Don't get me wrong, I love the devious stuff and its part of the reason I love your work so much, but a part of me felt bad about the prospect of our friend here being milked all night, alone in a dark room after begging for mercy....
It still happened, but at least hes okay. And hopefully he has learned his lesson. Or there will be zero mercy next time I would assume... lol
It still happened, but at least hes okay. And hopefully he has learned his lesson. Or there will be zero mercy next time I would assume... lol
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