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Pippuri
Currently working on a Text Adventure involving all my current and future Poke'OCs!
After playtests and critique from a few of my friends, I have now gotten to a point where I can share this lovely Alpha!
Few things to note about this Text Adventure:
-All vore scenes involving the player are endo
-Exploration is only limited to the Castle
-This is a complete casual vore dating simulation with a narrative story that describes the world around you
-The Player is identified as a Human Male (I don't really plan on make a customizable player as this is a narrative story)
Currently, there are only 4 introduction routes, each with their own vore scene that sets up the characters and world you will be playing in. There is a computer at the end of the route that will easily take you back to the choices.
What I have planned for this release:
-Limited exploration with the Castle (I will be keeping most of the Castle closed off but gradually open more areas as I add more characters).
-Multiple Vore Scenes for each Character (Including secret vore scenes)
-Relationships (Develop relationships with each Pokemon that will add exclusive scenes)
-Ping and Request system (Find out where everyone is at and ask for them to go to a specific location)
-Making the characters as lively as possible (Making each character roam, interact with stuff, and create random idle chatter with you)
Progress is going rather slow as I am still getting around to learning Quest's tools, but I am excited to finish this and share with all of you guys ^^
Without further ado:
Download the Quest file here!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/19P.....ew?usp=sharing
The game requires the Quest app. If you don't already have it, download it from their site here: http://textadventures.co.uk/quest/desktop
Alternatively, you can play the game on their online version. However, the online version is very buggy with frequent disconnects!
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/v.....etirement-plan
Lastly, all critique is welcomed! I look forward to hearing what you guys think about this ^^
PippuriCurrently working on a Text Adventure involving all my current and future Poke'OCs!
After playtests and critique from a few of my friends, I have now gotten to a point where I can share this lovely Alpha!
Few things to note about this Text Adventure:
-All vore scenes involving the player are endo
-Exploration is only limited to the Castle
-This is a complete casual vore dating simulation with a narrative story that describes the world around you
-The Player is identified as a Human Male (I don't really plan on make a customizable player as this is a narrative story)
Currently, there are only 4 introduction routes, each with their own vore scene that sets up the characters and world you will be playing in. There is a computer at the end of the route that will easily take you back to the choices.
What I have planned for this release:
-Limited exploration with the Castle (I will be keeping most of the Castle closed off but gradually open more areas as I add more characters).
-Multiple Vore Scenes for each Character (Including secret vore scenes)
-Relationships (Develop relationships with each Pokemon that will add exclusive scenes)
-Ping and Request system (Find out where everyone is at and ask for them to go to a specific location)
-Making the characters as lively as possible (Making each character roam, interact with stuff, and create random idle chatter with you)
Progress is going rather slow as I am still getting around to learning Quest's tools, but I am excited to finish this and share with all of you guys ^^
Without further ado:
Download the Quest file here!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/19P.....ew?usp=sharing
The game requires the Quest app. If you don't already have it, download it from their site here: http://textadventures.co.uk/quest/desktop
Alternatively, you can play the game on their online version. However, the online version is very buggy with frequent disconnects!
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/v.....etirement-plan
Lastly, all critique is welcomed! I look forward to hearing what you guys think about this ^^
Category Story / Vore
Species Pokemon
Gender Multiple characters
Size 2121 x 1413px
File Size 3.12 MB
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Very interesting story! I love stories that are not fatal and instead enhance the friendship between pred and prey!
I have completed all four storylines, and I am looking forward to the follow-up!
(Already recommended to my friends)
So will other pokemon characters be added in the future right? Although it may be a bit presumptuous, let me ask curiously, will there be such popular pokemons as Salazzle and Charizard, or even legendary pokemons such as Lugia and Reshiram? (well, legendary pokemons are unlikely since Blaziken is already queen)
Finally, there is a suggestion, I hope to add some sound effects, or even pictures (sorry, this may be too much work, but I do want to have some sound effects, not just text, this will definitely make for a better reading experience!)
I have completed all four storylines, and I am looking forward to the follow-up!
(Already recommended to my friends)
So will other pokemon characters be added in the future right? Although it may be a bit presumptuous, let me ask curiously, will there be such popular pokemons as Salazzle and Charizard, or even legendary pokemons such as Lugia and Reshiram? (well, legendary pokemons are unlikely since Blaziken is already queen)
Finally, there is a suggestion, I hope to add some sound effects, or even pictures (sorry, this may be too much work, but I do want to have some sound effects, not just text, this will definitely make for a better reading experience!)
I will say the intro sequence was, not quite what I was expecting. I dont get why there is a war going on with humans, and also the fact how you kind of ignore the fact how they just eat and kill other humans on a whim. The lack of player choices makes things feel a bit one-sided also.
Still, the main characters are cute and have interesting personalities. The game looks promising overall, and I look forwards to see what else you will add to it in the future
Still, the main characters are cute and have interesting personalities. The game looks promising overall, and I look forwards to see what else you will add to it in the future
I have felt the same as well with the war stuff. The only reason for it seems to be the need to eat others they got after they changed, for no explained reason. Also, he just goes from being disturbed of their bodies being made from the lives of others, to almost accepting it moments later, of which, I don't know about you, but I would always be unnerved with that fact, and try to figure some way to stop the war. Considering the position of his friends though, that could be an ending in the full game. Still, I think the stomach fumes are getting to him.
I plan on having more lore sprinkled around the main game. I didn't want the intros to feel long and be an exposition dump. All that you know is Mysterious event, Pokemon changed and became ravenous towards Humans, and now there is a war after 4 years. The actual intro path takes place 4 years later and the player hasn't actually witness them eating anyone since the event, so nothing has triggered that post-event trauma aside from being eaten yourself (which is displayed by the struggling you do). I could add some more uneasiness when the girls casually talk about eating other Humans, but most of the time they are talking about that, it is in their own language. So, meta-speaking, your player does not understand anything they are saying when their text is in blue.
There is a lack of choice for now mainly because it is an intro. Choices will start becoming more prevalent once you roam the castle and interact with the characters but won't have much of a story impact till at least the 2nd release with the 4 other characters. So for now, it is just world building and lore.
Glad you are liking it so far ^^
There is a lack of choice for now mainly because it is an intro. Choices will start becoming more prevalent once you roam the castle and interact with the characters but won't have much of a story impact till at least the 2nd release with the 4 other characters. So for now, it is just world building and lore.
Glad you are liking it so far ^^
I just dont like the grin elements to it, but I guess thats just me being sensitive. I do like how the pokemon pack are caring of their master, but the fact they see other humans as nothing but food is very concerning to me. Maybe they have a reason for their distrusts of them, I dont know. Just seems unfair to condemn a whole race like that, but I guess thats just the way its meant to be.
They do have maids in the castle, showing that they do have more roles for humans aside from just being food. Not much is known about the humans that live in their territories since the only intro path is you living in a worn-down, over-populated refugee city with strict curfews, but more will be known in the 1st release as well as future releases with different introduction paths. I will add more uneasiness to the player and have him accept and adjust to the new way of life, but that in itself would be challenging as the player would not be bound to any path. Would be very time consuming to add flavor text detailing the player's growth in becoming more accustomed to the new way of life to every possible (and growing) activities / interactions the player can do right out of the gate.
Well, to be fair, when you go on a Pokémon adventure, most interactions your Pokémon have with other humans is when they have to fight against them. Would also apply to the wild Pokémon, as they see humans commanding other Pokémon to commit genocide during their "level grinds", although I don't know how much the transformations apply to them, as some wild rattata are found in the third route to be unaffected. With that in mind, it seems like their chance to become the predators would be their time for revenge against the humans. Also, it seems like an insatiable urge, as the queen is concerned with any other Pokémon eating her master but is unable to command her subjects to not eat any humans. The urge has been with the Pokémon for years as well, so finding anyone who doesn't partake in the new diet would be few and far between, and at the beginning the urge is too sudden for them to be able to resist it.
Yes, I found out that when the font is blue it means the Pokémon are communicating in their language and "I" can only hear the Pokémon's voice.
But this dude did remind me that after all, it has become a consensus around the world that Pokémon can eat people, and these "my" party members even have eaten up the entire castle. "I" should be upset with them, well, although I know it's because "I" am their master, "I" should trust them and believe that they won't do anything bad to me, but after all, they do eat a lot of humans, Human beings are empathetic creatures after all, I think something should be expressed. I guess the "I" in the story accepts reality a little too fast.
Maybe in the early stages of the story, he could be a little more nervous?
Well, in general, this is a vorish story after all! The above issues that can reflect the contradictions between the characters may be an extra bonus if they are dealt well, but even simply skipping it doesn't hurt. After all we all know our focus is on cute or pretty pokemon bellies or something like.
But this dude did remind me that after all, it has become a consensus around the world that Pokémon can eat people, and these "my" party members even have eaten up the entire castle. "I" should be upset with them, well, although I know it's because "I" am their master, "I" should trust them and believe that they won't do anything bad to me, but after all, they do eat a lot of humans, Human beings are empathetic creatures after all, I think something should be expressed. I guess the "I" in the story accepts reality a little too fast.
Maybe in the early stages of the story, he could be a little more nervous?
Well, in general, this is a vorish story after all! The above issues that can reflect the contradictions between the characters may be an extra bonus if they are dealt well, but even simply skipping it doesn't hurt. After all we all know our focus is on cute or pretty pokemon bellies or something like.
Update: I just finished all four of the introductory routes and I super dig the writing and characterization of the characters! Kenche is probably my favorite so far.
I'd totally help fund this game or just throw money at it, this is probably one of my favorite written vore works yet, I'd love to see this finished!
I'd totally help fund this game or just throw money at it, this is probably one of my favorite written vore works yet, I'd love to see this finished!
Thank you so much ^^
There will be male preds along with alternate types of vore. Once I include alt vore, I will make sure to put disclaimers prior to you heading down that path.
As for male preds, the main cast will have males later down the line, but the collectable vore stories will have male preds.
There will be male preds along with alternate types of vore. Once I include alt vore, I will make sure to put disclaimers prior to you heading down that path.
As for male preds, the main cast will have males later down the line, but the collectable vore stories will have male preds.
Good to hear!!
I finalized all the diferrent introductions and I can't choose a favorite! You wrote them to good!
Final question tho, this will be romantic/vorish fic between the pokemon and their trainer (The Player), if I choose the path with Alani it ends there? Or I can begin a new path with Yurie for example
I finalized all the diferrent introductions and I can't choose a favorite! You wrote them to good!
Final question tho, this will be romantic/vorish fic between the pokemon and their trainer (The Player), if I choose the path with Alani it ends there? Or I can begin a new path with Yurie for example
There will be multiple outcomes to an "ending" but the game won't end. Nothing will be locked out from the choices you make.
Don't really want players to have to redo and encounter mostly the same scenarios and dialogue, so they can pretty much do everything they can from one save file. All the intros can be revisited via the computer in the player's room and the only real impact the initial intro has is giving a headstart to the Pokemon's affection.
Don't really want players to have to redo and encounter mostly the same scenarios and dialogue, so they can pretty much do everything they can from one save file. All the intros can be revisited via the computer in the player's room and the only real impact the initial intro has is giving a headstart to the Pokemon's affection.
not a huge fan of the setting, but thats more personal preference than anything else, and also I'm just some random nobody, so my opinion doesn't really matter.
that being said, I do like sharing my opinions.
as such I will say that Yurie is my fav character. always love a truly gluttonous pred.
kenshe is also pretty cool.
that being said, I do like sharing my opinions.
as such I will say that Yurie is my fav character. always love a truly gluttonous pred.
kenshe is also pretty cool.
Given your response to the comment just above mine would it be possible to toss money at you to allow you to make progress on this without worry of wasting time that could have been used for profit? I don't want to put pressure though as that often affects the quality of the work and stresses the creator. Just asking so feel free to say no though I would guess I'm likely not the only one willing to toss so money to see this develop. Either way, best of luck with all your projects!
I appreciate the thought! Although, I would rather not give priority over which project is getting the most budget. Progress is still being made on this as I have written rough drafts of a few more scenarios. Support is still greatly appreciated via my Patreon where I share all my WiPs and news on ^^
how long is the player allowed to stay in the bellies and is there option to cuddle with the Pokémon. p.s. i hope i don't sound pushy but is the next version read because no words can describe the love for this game i have and do you have to release some more characters before or after the release of another version of this game. sorry but i have so many questions
the MC has the forgiveness of a goddamn saint compared to me.
if that were me, i would have Blown up at the pokemon whom came to get me. I would have viewed the complete and total breakdown of human-pokemon relationships on that fateful day on the intro as a *complete and utter Betrayal* They probs wouldve had to knock me out in order to retrieve me lmfao
if that were me, i would have Blown up at the pokemon whom came to get me. I would have viewed the complete and total breakdown of human-pokemon relationships on that fateful day on the intro as a *complete and utter Betrayal* They probs wouldve had to knock me out in order to retrieve me lmfao
From what I've played so far, it looks great. I really like the writing and the dynamic between the trainer and the pokemon there. I've seen a few spelling mistakes here and there, but for the most part it's fantastic. Really good work for a first release! Can't wait to see more from these girls~ :3c
This has to be the best vore related read I’ve seen, period. Heavily anticipating the next update to this, but I’ve noticed your lack of inactivity. Are you alright? With all the drama going around everywhere, I can’t help but be concerned every time I find someone who’s been inactive for about a year. Hope your doing well <3
Adter playing it, I was choosing the Weavile as my favorite. Until I chose Yurie, the Zangoose.
Boy her route pressed all my buttons right. Her being chubby enough to hide her prey, she expertiseally eating her prey with just two gulps, her casuality towards her prey and unawareness, she hiding the prey inside her, her glutoness and her teasing~
Def my favorited of all~ ♡♡♡
Hope you find time to work on this project ♡
Boy her route pressed all my buttons right. Her being chubby enough to hide her prey, she expertiseally eating her prey with just two gulps, her casuality towards her prey and unawareness, she hiding the prey inside her, her glutoness and her teasing~
Def my favorited of all~ ♡♡♡
Hope you find time to work on this project ♡
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