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Here we are, end of the line. Discuss? I've got several paths I could take here. Also thinking maybe I want to flex my action muscles some more. I haven't really done that since the witch fight in BnE.
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Wow thanks for the thoughtful post! Honestly I hadn't considered the protag moving out of town into a potentially mostly human society. I don't think I'll go in that direction but it easily could. I like the idea there's more to the virus than even this. We'll see.
I'm always on Discord. Always willing to toss my ideas around. Also my channel link is here.
https://discordapp.com/invite/xFEhhbP
I'm always on Discord. Always willing to toss my ideas around. Also my channel link is here.
https://discordapp.com/invite/xFEhhbP
But the real question is, how does one go about getting infected?
Both for the story, science, and um..can this be irl um...science too!
All not really joking aside XD
It is extraordinary how well you can understand this character and there feelings through the comic pages,
and there general demeanor, annoyance, dealing with it, etc. Also seems like they are so worried
about themselves-and reasonably so-they don't quite notice some not-so-subtle things going on in
the outside world, leading to this then inevitable ending of it being a pretty effective virus.
Both for the story, science, and um..can this be irl um...science too!
All not really joking aside XD
It is extraordinary how well you can understand this character and there feelings through the comic pages,
and there general demeanor, annoyance, dealing with it, etc. Also seems like they are so worried
about themselves-and reasonably so-they don't quite notice some not-so-subtle things going on in
the outside world, leading to this then inevitable ending of it being a pretty effective virus.
The story could go a multitude of ways...
The more sex filled route leads to the protag being bent over the counter, giving into her desires right then and the man would either slap her ass and send her on her way, or keep her till she fully transforms.
Less sex, she gets her stuff and feels extremely horny at him looking up and down her curves. They talk about the virus and she goes home to think things through and try to control her urges.
Compromise, the guy mentions a town meeting where they will discuss the changes that is happening to the whole town. But the primal urges of everyone turns it into a big orgy and well... it devolves into her last bits of manhood leaving, giving her a fresh hole to potentially give to some willing male.
That’s just my ideas at face value. Great comic as always! :D Can’t wait to see what happens next
The more sex filled route leads to the protag being bent over the counter, giving into her desires right then and the man would either slap her ass and send her on her way, or keep her till she fully transforms.
Less sex, she gets her stuff and feels extremely horny at him looking up and down her curves. They talk about the virus and she goes home to think things through and try to control her urges.
Compromise, the guy mentions a town meeting where they will discuss the changes that is happening to the whole town. But the primal urges of everyone turns it into a big orgy and well... it devolves into her last bits of manhood leaving, giving her a fresh hole to potentially give to some willing male.
That’s just my ideas at face value. Great comic as always! :D Can’t wait to see what happens next
How about, you try something like the virus is short term but now it seems to have died out in the spread. The societal tear that it caused was a gender swap/creature transformation and seems to only spread through some means of sexual contact with the beasts now. Meaning that human society has been able to operate with them however, the result is that it creates sort of.. the 'fan club' of tabboo society folks who want to experience the full sexual experience of being these overly sensitive sexual beings. Kind of deal perhaps.
Just a thought but I got home from DnD and I am not the most creative after running a game.
Just a thought but I got home from DnD and I am not the most creative after running a game.
Ok, I really wanna see where this is going! You could have so much fun with it!
Here's my story pitch for what it's worth:
What if the 'virus' isn't really a virus. The papers call it that because of the way it's spreading, but what if it's the birth of magic into the world, and things are gonna get very fantasy-like very soon. heck, this could be a prequel to some of your other comics. ^^
Here's my story pitch for what it's worth:
What if the 'virus' isn't really a virus. The papers call it that because of the way it's spreading, but what if it's the birth of magic into the world, and things are gonna get very fantasy-like very soon. heck, this could be a prequel to some of your other comics. ^^
This is definitely interesting! In this situation I think I'd find myself asking if anything seems strange to other folks. I mean, right now we don't have any clarification on what the "Wren Valley Virus" is. Could be turning people into animal-people, could be something else entirely. There's a chance that this is all happening to the protagonist because they've been slowly transported into a world where this is just normal.
Of course, assuming that the twist is this is happening to multiple people in one place, like it seems to be, that also leaves the questions "does this flip everyone's sex, or is it mostly creating females?" and "Why are we allowed to go out in public without being experimented on?"
Right now I'm pretty sure this guy is just going to be stunned seeing someone else halfway in his own position. Animal yes, turning into a girl (apparently) no. Then again, like I said earlier, could be this clerk used to be a woman before the shift. No way of knowing.
As far as action goes... well, the only idea I have there is that if Wren Valley is under lockdown (which it very well could be) then the protagonist might choose to make a break for it and escape whatever border or barricade they've got going on. Still, that kind of conflicts with the fact that he was trying to lay low and hole up in his home for this long.
Of course, assuming that the twist is this is happening to multiple people in one place, like it seems to be, that also leaves the questions "does this flip everyone's sex, or is it mostly creating females?" and "Why are we allowed to go out in public without being experimented on?"
Right now I'm pretty sure this guy is just going to be stunned seeing someone else halfway in his own position. Animal yes, turning into a girl (apparently) no. Then again, like I said earlier, could be this clerk used to be a woman before the shift. No way of knowing.
As far as action goes... well, the only idea I have there is that if Wren Valley is under lockdown (which it very well could be) then the protagonist might choose to make a break for it and escape whatever border or barricade they've got going on. Still, that kind of conflicts with the fact that he was trying to lay low and hole up in his home for this long.
Since this is getting the reader into the mindset of someone changing into a horny anthro girl, caused by a virus that has spread across the town, which seems to be at a turning point of people with similar thoughts coming out to refresh their food supply, we should see people being recruited to go to peoples houses to try and tell them they aren't alone in this.
The big question would be why the military hasn't been called in to quarantine the place, it's likely some kind of experiment, as an attack from another country would have been contained, and an outbreak would have been contained too. That, or the whole world is affected and somehow this character slipped through the cracks when this was being reported. Given the internet cut out, sounds like information containment rather than anything enforced.
I think, if realism is the goal, this needs to be a global event, there's nowhere to go. A few people might have a cure or be immune, and they take advantage of this when visiting these towns. Maybe the main character gets caught up in that, either joining a few humans trying to reverse this, or humans who capture her and others who aren't completely gone.
Ah, some people might have converted more than she has, she's teetering on the edge between giving in to her urges and continuing her life, assuming she holds it together long enough to get cured.
The big question would be why the military hasn't been called in to quarantine the place, it's likely some kind of experiment, as an attack from another country would have been contained, and an outbreak would have been contained too. That, or the whole world is affected and somehow this character slipped through the cracks when this was being reported. Given the internet cut out, sounds like information containment rather than anything enforced.
I think, if realism is the goal, this needs to be a global event, there's nowhere to go. A few people might have a cure or be immune, and they take advantage of this when visiting these towns. Maybe the main character gets caught up in that, either joining a few humans trying to reverse this, or humans who capture her and others who aren't completely gone.
Ah, some people might have converted more than she has, she's teetering on the edge between giving in to her urges and continuing her life, assuming she holds it together long enough to get cured.
Yooooo, what a cool little twist. I actually quite like this even as an ending, if I'm being honest. Although, if I were to go from here, I would have our main character try to meet a friend for coffee or something to talk things out and inevitably get lewd with them ^^
Also your writing is excellent
Also your writing is excellent
Enjoying these, I’m hoping the main character is unique, or among only a few with the gender bending aspect of the virus... idk why though...
I’d have her hide the nature of her affliction but try to get some info. She would likely get invited to some group by the shopkeep, and try to hide the fact she is still changing. Perhaps a dnd group or just a few folks having coffee- whatever it is normal ppl meet and do.
I would also have the main characters changes be contagious, have one or two of the group screw her and start to succumb to feminization- or even a tftg to another species ad the virus mutates.
I’d have her hide the nature of her affliction but try to get some info. She would likely get invited to some group by the shopkeep, and try to hide the fact she is still changing. Perhaps a dnd group or just a few folks having coffee- whatever it is normal ppl meet and do.
I would also have the main characters changes be contagious, have one or two of the group screw her and start to succumb to feminization- or even a tftg to another species ad the virus mutates.
Very nice! I love the world you're setting up here and look forward to seeing more. The sense of urban decay from panic or societal fragmentation during the scenes outside really creates a nice sense of atmosphere.
Stories like these, where society hasn't entirely fallen apart (at least, not everywhere) but is still struggling and quite unsure of how to deal with such a radical change are quite interesting. I can imagine all sorts of potentially new interesting avenues for exploration and conflict...
1. Do herbivores fear carnivores in this new world, and should they?
2. As some have suggested, does the virus affect some more intensely than others, creating dangerously animalistic individuals that others fear they may one day become as well?
3. What instincts does the change bring on other than what looks to be a heightened sex drive, and how does this affect social interactions when everyone's constantly horny?
4. How does society adapt when some people can't do their usual jobs anymore due to how much they've changed?
5. Do carnivores opt for hunting ordinary animals to obtain meat, and if so, how does hunting as a predator affect their psyches and self-image?
Regardless, best of luck making more, and thanks for sharing it with us!
Stories like these, where society hasn't entirely fallen apart (at least, not everywhere) but is still struggling and quite unsure of how to deal with such a radical change are quite interesting. I can imagine all sorts of potentially new interesting avenues for exploration and conflict...
1. Do herbivores fear carnivores in this new world, and should they?
2. As some have suggested, does the virus affect some more intensely than others, creating dangerously animalistic individuals that others fear they may one day become as well?
3. What instincts does the change bring on other than what looks to be a heightened sex drive, and how does this affect social interactions when everyone's constantly horny?
4. How does society adapt when some people can't do their usual jobs anymore due to how much they've changed?
5. Do carnivores opt for hunting ordinary animals to obtain meat, and if so, how does hunting as a predator affect their psyches and self-image?
Regardless, best of luck making more, and thanks for sharing it with us!
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