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So far this was one of the best first impressions I've ever had of a story, very straight to the point and still managed to explain how this "world" works in an easy and practical way, so far I don't have much to say about the secondary characters since little was shown in relation to them, but I must say that I really liked the MC, experienced and not the typical "helpless protagonist", I think the only thing that disappoints in him is in the physical aspect, this thing of characters without appearance often ruins the immersion of the story because I can't mentally visualize a character that doesn't have a single physical description... not even hair, but other than that, this is a VN with one of the greatest potential I've ever seen and really makes me anxious every second I read it, it's been a long time since I felt like this reading a story, great work.

Scene 1: Lucian

Scene 2: Atlas

Its like... the only combination I see possible since in the second image it seems to be stripes and the only person with that color pattern is Atlas

I'm enjoying the story and I find the concept interesting, but it's kind of hard to swallow Raoul Path with the "you killed my friends and kidnapped me", I kind of grew resentment towards him, and at no point did he show remorse for anything and that makes everything she's done so far seem more like he's taking care of MC like a pet, I don't like him, but out of all the other two routes his seems to have the most interesting story... but I feel emotionally very distant from the character himself. 

● But overall I really liked the story and how each route is different, each main character has a distinct personality, Dancan strongly gives off the vibe of an antagonist while Alvirn gives off the vibe of a hero, in fact, when I started reading I didn't expect Alvirn to become my favorite.  

I'm looking forward to more of this universe.

The answer is absolutely yes, but do you also have any plans regarding Oblation? I would like to know because I have developed a certain fondness for the idea of the story and would like to know if it still has a future.

How do I increase the value of pirate currency ?

I felt the same thing, for sure someone will die on this journey, and I think it will be Takhi due to her history with blackzones and how her entire plot was built around that, now we have a chance for her to overcome her trauma and conclude her character journey....in the end we won't get the "naked spar" she want

*spoiler*

did we just get a foreshadow for a supposed part where Byte will have to go to Loken's body and stop the MC from doing something really wrong?

*A small inconvenient event happens*

Trio: With this treasure I summon...A Bag of gold 

Which part ? I tried to do it and it was just a normal dream

I've been following this work since the first build, it was a pleasure to follow it and I can't believe that so much time has passed since it all started, you created a story that made me feel nostalgic and I'm going to miss Chris and Ton a lot
(I will mention you in my therapy)

The Echo's reference when Yuke called Chris by Chase's name was actually really good

At this point, is every chapter going to end with Lucian being in an uncomfortable situation with someone he has an interest in? 

(I loved the chapter, looking forward to the next chapters)

This new chapter was great, and this ending was like getting punched in the face.